


In the top image, a "d" should be added at the end of "an".
In the top left corner, the use of the word goad does not make sense.
In the third image, there is an unnecessary set of quotation marks. There should not be any quotes before the sentence beginning with "In".
In the fourth image, the sentence is double punctuated. There is an unnecessary placement of a period before the comma.

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